I can do magic.
I can turn bottles
Into smiles
And smiles
Into kisses.
I know your tastes
And I'll make mixes
That'll turn your cheeks red.
We'll share a smile
Laugh a while
Then end up in bed.
All the while inside my head
Things are still mixed up, on the rocks.
















Comments
Well done!!
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Thanks to words, we have been able to rise above the brutes; and thanks to words, we have often sunk to the level of the demons. - Aldous Huxley
Sorry I haven't critiqued this until now. I wish I could say I've been busy, but really, I've just been distracted. I'm barely keeping up with my own work by now. Also, I'd like to say that I did read this the second you posted it. I just haven't commented until now.
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"I try not to let my schooling interfere with my education."
-Mark Twain
I also have more poems to post, so I guess I'll do that soon!
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"Young man, lift up your russet brow, and lift your tender eyelids, maid, and brood on hopes and fears no more." - W.B. Yeats
I need to devote more time to reading and writing, too. Work seems to have gotten in the way a bit, and I hardly even touch pen to paper right now. I really need to fix that. For the most part, I've been writing songs. I'll try to post more poetry and prose that have been in the works soon, though.
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"I try not to let my schooling interfere with my education."
-Mark Twain
It's hard not to like this piece, I think. You're rather good at these short poems.
I haven't been posting a lot of my new work on Deviantart. Most of it hasn't really been that great. I've been going through a dry spell of sorts. Usually when they end it's with a bang, so I'm hoping for a really good piece soon! Last time I had writers block this bad was just before I wrote The Mountain.
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"Young man, lift up your russet brow, and lift your tender eyelids, maid, and brood on hopes and fears no more." - W.B. Yeats
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"Young man, lift up your russet brow, and lift your tender eyelids, maid, and brood on hopes and fears no more." - W.B. Yeats
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